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All Deviations
All Deviations


Perfect lips
Once soft
Now stained onyx
With your own words.
Words that came so easily to you
Seething thick and smooth
Like molasses
Your sugar-coated language
Spoken fluently
With a forked tongue
And no twinge of guilt.

Strong hands
You used to build me up so high
Then pull me under.
The ones that held my heart
My soul, my life
For so long.
That were so gentle
But could have easily broken me
If you'd wanted them to.
Why didn't you?
My body should match my heart
So it'll look just right.

Gleaming eyes
Shimmering full of dangerous knowledge
Of your own tales
And your own deceit.
You have played you game well.
So much pride....
There in your gaze
I used to see myself.
I still see that...
Sometimes.
At least,
I wish I did.
I'm not really sure what I see now.

So much betrayal
Crawling in your veins
Waiting to be used.
Poison words,
Deadly actions.
Or so it seems to me.
An attraction so fatal to my heart
But I can't pull myself away.
Will it kill me?
Eventually, maybe...
But who can be sure?

I wonder if your own venom
Would bring you down?
Or are you immune?
Is that why
You can operate so smoothly
So cleverly?
Like clockwork.
You remind me of the workman
Who has done one task for so long
That it is his only nature.

Your beauty is that of the human world.
Shallow sometimes
But worth appreciating.
Just remember that it will fade
In time.
Your heart is a mystery to me
But it draws me in.
I want to know more
Of your secret.
Your soul is what corrupted you.
It is that of the serpent.
And you have lived the ways
Of your own
Those defenseless humans
Love you all the same
Don't they?

Its a shame that they know of you
But choose to ignore
That small detail
Of danger.
Too stubborn to believe
That beasts can be beautiful
To the eyes at least.
Your illusion is one of intricate design.
And I am caught spellbound.
Your venom
So dangerous
So deadly
Tastes so tempting
So sweet.
Seething thick and smooth.
Like molasses.
I wonder if your own nectar
Would make you sick?
I wonder if your own venom
Will bring you down...
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Not much i can say.
Hopefully you don't know very many people like this.
And if you do.
Then.... :hug:
You need it.

If you're reading this, btw, you know who you are.
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~Demon-of-Knowledge:iconDemon-of-Knowledge: May 12, 2008, 2:02:34 PM
His own venom may not be able to bring him down, but another serpents venom, one with a tongue to rival Lucifers, may be able to bring this serpent down. If theres a big beast in ur way just get a bigger beast to kill it. U have many serpents at ur disposal, but none more dangerous then the one, aint that right......*cringe*........*shiver*.....*cough* buddy *cough*

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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is wut dies inside us while we live.
~Voice-of-October:iconVoice-of-October: May 12, 2008, 2:03:33 PM
yeah thats right.
but i do wonder what would happen if we turned his own poison against him

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Never despair, but know yourself.
The heart has its reasons which reason knows nothing of.
And while life is short, the voice left behind is eternal.
~Demon-of-Knowledge:iconDemon-of-Knowledge: May 12, 2008, 2:05:10 PM
most beasts are immune to there own power, its usually because some circumstance. I am immune to knowledge because i dont really care wut ppl know......like how u told Brooke about tht one thing........

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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is wut dies inside us while we live.
~Voice-of-October:iconVoice-of-October: May 12, 2008, 5:29:14 PM
sry it was either that or she'd say something to someone else about something that coudl NOT get out

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Never despair, but know yourself.
The heart has its reasons which reason knows nothing of.
And while life is short, the voice left behind is eternal.
~Demon-of-Knowledge:iconDemon-of-Knowledge: May 12, 2008, 6:11:07 PM
its all good, it really doesnt matter

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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is wut dies inside us while we live.
~DrakenDeath43:iconDrakenDeath43: May 17, 2008, 6:22:43 PM Mood: Movingon
if u want to turn my poison against me then try i play my game wekl yes this is true. my venom will not bring me down no matter wht form of death u oppose on me my venom is mine alone and solid like u said my likes are stained like onyx and so it will stay. and wht did u say to her. now i've corrupted u and now ur plating games with me. gd luck monchrie. this serpent is the deadliest my friends and tht's how it will stay nothn is big enough to take me down not even to my kness the serpents may be at ur diposal Rowyn but they long and ur'n for there king.

now and forever
in the defiing gaze
struck by lighning
and a crack of thunder
the waves attack in the sea
call forth ur weapons
try and take me to my knees
triuph will fall before me.
and no one will take me down with them

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Burning inside letting the fire seep threw your veins the blood loss the rising heat and the death it lays before you. Death is willing but the question is are you
~Blazing-Wolf1763:iconBlazing-Wolf1763: May 17, 2008, 7:07:43 PM
did it ever once aoccur to you that this isn't about you?????? Maybe its about someone else. i dont always write about you.
actually this one is about Damien so assume whatever the hell you want to. he pulled some retarded crap the other day and i got pissed at him.
if you wna get a story ill give you a hell of one.
and if i saw you so harshly, i wouldnt bother with you would i?

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Redeem me into childhood
Show me myself without the shell
Like the advent of May
I`ll be there when you say
Time to never hold our love
My fall will be for you
My love will be in you
You were the one to cut me
So I will bleed forever
~DrakenDeath43:iconDrakenDeath43: May 17, 2008, 8:39:02 PM
U know Wht Fine w/e and if ur wondering about my new gf keep wonderin. till monday cuz lest i get d heart to tell u nvm den but u knw wht i vwill and it's............................................... u knw wht nvm it's not worth my time and u know wht assemble a god damn army to try to take me out. i can tell u a bunch tht won't help u cuz ur to controling and a bunch of other things. amanda, stephenie, erica, kourtney well damn hell maybe even brooke if i play the game how it should be........................ if u wnt to see corruption death anxiety and the power of will and brute force so be it now u've fucking got it and u know wht go tell twinkie or brandon or whomever else. none of thm can take me.

take me and drain
the life within
fighting forever
till strength regained
beside wolve's beast and creatures of the night
power come from within
not wht's outside
kill the nonebeliever
let them bleed at my feet
let their eyes peer into mine and let thm weep with tears
considerably dreadfull
fightung for ur own breath
i'll leave u frozen and cold
lifeless and alone
u got wht u wntd
now the darkness engolfes me
keeps me alone
no pieces shattered
no broken bones
i'll leave u with this
Don't Fuck With Me Girl
u still don't know me
just like most of the world

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Burning inside letting the fire seep threw your veins the blood loss the rising heat and the death it lays before you. Death is willing but the question is are you
~Blazing-Wolf1763:iconBlazing-Wolf1763: May 17, 2008, 8:41:35 PM
go ahead and kill me
i dare you.
you dont know me either.
girls like me are made of these things:
anger
hatred
gunpowder
lead

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Redeem me into childhood
Show me myself without the shell
Like the advent of May
I`ll be there when you say
Time to never hold our love
My fall will be for you
My love will be in you
You were the one to cut me
So I will bleed forever